Emotions recollected in tranquility on University Ave

Emotions recollected in tranquility on University Ave


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TEMPORARY poem on the Walk (untitled by anonymous)


• August 31, 2015

Those musingly following my summer of love picaresque have wincingly witnessed my forays into the higher (and lower) realms of poetry: a raucous impromptu poetry slam at Lux Lounge, the tragic vision of Adelaide Crapsey in Mt. Hope, my own rickety stanzas on the Canal Path, reflections under a tranquil bridge in Pittsford, and now my temporary, “anonymous,” untitled chalk zen poem on the Poets Walk (see at end, I know this is a long post but it’s a long poets walk).

Actually, much of my inspiration springs from a rediscovery of one of our overlooked gemstones, The Poets Walk on University Avenue alongside the Memorial Art Gallery. Ambling and admiring: morning coffee on the Otterness sculptures before SOTA opens to late evening strolls after music at Starry Nites. But what exactly is this sidewalk splattered with so many words like magnetic poetry on refrigerators all about?

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To learn more about the Poets Walk, stretching from Goodman to Prince on University as part of the Neighborhood of the Arts, I went to the expert, Kitty Jospé who since its inception has given hundreds of tours. Kitty has been a docent at the MAG since 1998 and, amongst her many accomplishments, received an MFA in creative writing in 2009.

The words inscribed on tiles (pavers) and granite tablets come from poems by DEF poets, BOA poets, Teacher Poets, Living and Dead Poets, Poet Laureates, International Poets who have traveled through Rochester, Aspiring Poets, Just Poets, Rochester Poets.

Poets Walk represents a wonderful sampling of Rochester’s rich literary history.  Those from the 19th and 20th century not only different poetic styles (imagist, black mountain school, etc.) but a range of themes such as “being black in America” (whether as slave, or as a young SLAM artist), women’s rights and signed American Sign Language poems.

At least three of the poets live, work and write in Rochester. James Longenbach, Ph.D, teaches English at the University of Rochester. Sam Abrams is Professor emeritus at the Rochester Institute of Technology. Bobby Johnson, who was for many years a counselor at the NYS John Norris Treatment Center, is known by many as Rochester’s jazz poet laureate.emotions 3

empotions 4emitions 6I asked Kitty to give you a flavor of her tour. Once her passion for the walk unleashed, constraining Kitty is a herculean task:



Many people have wondered if they are walking on one long poem. It could be, as in the spirit of a “cento” where the art is in the arrangement of stolen lines. The possibilities for mixing and matching the musical phrasing are endless. I love matching the phrases both to the sculptures outside, as well as to works inside the MAG. It allows a deeper connection with both words in the poems and new ways of understanding the art.

For instance, if you pair the poem, “Looking” by W.D. Snodgrass with the kinetic sculpture, “2 lines up-Excentric, 12 feet” by George Rickey, set in the circle of PrairieDropseed in front of the MAG, the light will catch in the steel arms, scatter like seed in the grasses, and the metal will be transformed into a searchlight, sweeping the air. This enhances for me the words, “what was I looking for today” — and reinforces the multiplicity of art which seeks conversation, not answers.

How does light become seed? Steel become eyes? For both poets and artists, the idea is to engage a reader, a viewer, for there is no work of art without them. Poets walk is a way for everyone to participate in bringing art alive.

Instead of people shrugging at poetry and art as being “too difficult to understand,” poets walk invites curiosity to enter the picture, an active engagement to notice, to wonder and discover.

Mere sound bites! Of course, the whole point is taking the Poets Walk yourself.

Oh, one stanza you will not see. Recently, I lightly painted my own zen sandcastle poem on the sidewalk. Don’t worry, already washed away.


Walkers on my words,

Step by step,

Wearing them down to dust,

Know that I feel your soles.

Happily, Kitty did not object to my sidewalk graffiti:

It shows not only how the blank granite is inviting and waiting for poems, but the process of poetry, as a place for thoughts to find words, and inviting revision, whether by rain, snow, or another passer-by.

Kitty also offered a charitable explication (with some sound reshaping too):

David Kramer has captured the spirit of poets walk, a sidewalk filled with a scattering of musical phrasing that stretches between Goodman and Prince on University, in front of the MAG.emotions 2

On one of the blank granite “pavers” he chalked these words:
walkers on my words,
step by step
wearing them down to
know that I will feel
your soles.

He’s chosen five lines, (1, 5, 3, 6, 7 syllables) but not the cinquain, (2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllables) which you will find on the walk, invented by its author, Adelaide Crapsey. However, fine alliteration of windy w’s, stuttered st’s, the wearing down with doubling of d’s and the final play of homonyms sole/soul… echoes both the playful sense of the giant limestone Tom Otterness sculptures with a hint of Shelley:


Tom Otterness sculptures next to the Memorial Art Gallery 11/19/16 [Photo: David Kramer]

My name is
Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Nothing remains.


On the Road. Destination Little Bohemia in the South Wedge

In Mount Hope Cemetery remembering the tragic vision of Adelaide Crapsey and Two on a Rickety Bicycle and Is there a poem in this tragedy?

On the MAG An art museum as a place of meaning in a time of senselessness

On Kitty democratandchronicle.com/story/lifestyle/art/2014/08/31/o-pen-founder-pied-piper-poetry/14812229/

If you walk the Poet’s Walk with your cell phone, you can hear the entire poems that are only excerpted on the pavers. Access them from MAG’s smartphone app, MAGart 2.0 mag.rochester.edu/aroundmag/multimedia-magart-app/ or by calling 585.627.4132 and entering the first four letters of each poem.

And don’t forget the Story Walk, along Goodman Street, where you’ll hear stories of Rochester.

About The Author


Welcome to Talker of the Town! My name is David Kramer. I have a Ph.D in English and teach at Keuka College. I am a former and still active Fellow at the Nazareth College Center for Public History and a Storyteller in Residence at the SmallMatters Institute. Over the years, I have taught at Monroe Community College, the Rochester Institute of Technology and St. John Fisher College. I have published numerous Guest Essays, Letters, Book Reviews and Opinion pieces in The New York Times, Rochester Democrat and Chronicle, the Buffalo News, the Rochester Patriot, the Providence Journal, the Providence Business News, the Brown Alumni Magazine, the New London Day, the Boston Herald, the Messenger Post Newspapers, the Wedge, the Empty Closet, the CITY, Lake Affect Magazine and Brighton Connections. My poetry appears in The Criterion: An International Journal in English and Rundenalia and my academic writing in War, Literature and the Arts and Twentieth Century Literary Criticism. Starting in February 2013, I wrote for three Democratic and Chronicle  blogs, "Make City Schools Better," "Unite Rochester," and the "Editorial Board." When my tenure at the D & C  ended, I wanted to continue conversations first begun there. And start new ones.  So we created this new space, Talker of the Town, where all are invited to join. I don’t like to say these posts are “mine.” Very few of them are the sole product of my sometimes overheated imagination. Instead, I call them partnerships and collaborations. Or as they say in education, “peer group work.” Talker of the Town might better be Talkers of the Town. The blog won’t thrive without your leads, text, pictures, ideas, facebook shares, tweets, comments and criticisms.


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